Between the valour youth I live
They rule the world I feel
Still, I found tears in their eyes
In corners I traced them sobbing
Then I saw the youth in silence
They burst into fire at once
New age youth posses heart
That’s what I really comprehended
Then I explored the mind of mine
I felt the pain of the scars on it
I fear beneath my feeble soul
When am I going to spatter!
In the depth of my poetic vigour
Red fire seems to get lit...
They rule the world I feel
Still, I found tears in their eyes
In corners I traced them sobbing
Then I saw the youth in silence
They burst into fire at once
New age youth posses heart
That’s what I really comprehended
Then I explored the mind of mine
I felt the pain of the scars on it
I fear beneath my feeble soul
When am I going to spatter!
In the depth of my poetic vigour
Red fire seems to get lit...
1 comment:
luke....
the first thing i would like to spot out is that u use punctuations to the least.....it does not help us read fluently and accordingly....
and the last and final thing i would like to spot is that u create wonders with words.....gorgious...
keep goin!!! and keep writing!!!
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